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		<title>2 hours to go</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Sep 2005 17:36:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Parked on the harsh lonely, bleak plateform of Kings Cross, sharing a fag poorth her friend. This Friday night is full of rejected drunks, and for once, we're not the most intoxicated; we don;t even look that bad by comparison.. Lost, unnerved foreigns try to ignore us &#8212;occasionally they ask for direction. I begin spreading [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Parked on the harsh lonely, bleak plateform of Kings Cross, sharing a fag poorth her friend. This Friday night is full of rejected drunks, and for once, we're not the most intoxicated; we don;t even look that bad by comparison.. Lost, unnerved foreigns try to ignore us &#8212;occasionally they ask for direction. I begin spreading our damp ,quivering  limbs all over the cold floor, watching over stumbling people battle with their luggage.</p>
<p>I peered down at my observe we had just under 2 hours left. God what I would do for some themal socks. I felt so extermely pitiful and wretched.</p>
<p>Their she was! She climbed across the plateform with the final of her willpower. Her crimson sweatpants have seen better days , and her feet are ratteling around in school shoes. Her eyes look like they've seen so much sadness they're forever doomed to apathy..  One of her eyes seemed to have leak and it was clear that she was nearly blind.. Her eyes look like they've seen so much sadness they're forever doomed to apathy.. I looked at her withered face and imagining what drove her to this point ; that if I could not deal with 2 hours then I woudl never last as long as her , and all I'm upto is waiting for the last tain home.</p>
<p>She produced her  shaking, weak hand. </p>
<p>We turn out our pockets  but we have nothing at all. </p>
<p>As she moved away the staton seemed to swallows her racked, sad silhouette.</p>
<p>I search in my bags for a packat of fags. I stare for a while envoisuly at the couple takig up the only bench.. My body convusrse, almost like it is beggin me to find warth.</p>
<p>Then suddley the beggar tlady reappears.. Her boney weak hand, trembling with malmtrison, is now answering.</p>
<p>She put two fifty pence pieces   into my palm  and says, " get yourself a cup of coffee. It can get cold out here."</p>
<p>The darkness  gulps her up again before we had a change to say thank you .</p>
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		<title>God bless you</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Aug 2005 17:18:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Croched on the damp dreary, uninviting steps of Charing cross, spliting a soggle ciggerete
 with a boyfriend. This Saturday early morning is infested with drunks, and this time, we are not the most intoxicated; in compariosn we are doing quie well. Lost, unnerved foreigns don't even look &#8212;a couple ask for diections. I am spreading [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Croched on the damp dreary, uninviting steps of Charing cross, spliting a soggle ciggerete<br />
 with a boyfriend. This Saturday early morning is infested with drunks, and this time, we are not the most intoxicated; in compariosn we are doing quie well. Lost, unnerved foreigns don't even look &#8212;a couple ask for diections. I am spreading our shivering ,damp  limbs all over the cold floor, watching over stumbling travellers fight with the train doors.</p>
<p>Their she was! She shuffles out of the waiting room with the last of her strength. Her red sweatpants are tinged with brown , and her feet are cramed into city stained nike trainers. She limped as she walked, not like out of pain , but just because she was in too much pain to stop..  Her hair was so wispy it remined me of the damiblions we used to blow when we were children.. On her face you could see the lines that had been worn out by tears.. I'm looking at $THOSEGLASSEYES and wondering how this happen to her ; that I fell like I am nearly dead after only two hours , and all I'm upto is waiting for the next train.</p>
<p>Out comes her  trembling, decrept mit. </p>
<p>We look through our pockets  but find nothing but reciepts. </p>
<p>As she moved away the staton seemed to swallolled her descending, sad shadow.</p>
<p>Ligh another cigerette The second seem to drag on , forever we coul dnot see the end.. We are pushing reluctant time forward as it digs its heels in at the dusty smells and sounds of old stories, at the sucking of smoke, at our involuntary shivers.</p>
<p>Then the beggar woman returns. Her boney weak hand, tendling with old age, is now answering. She dropped a small pile of change   into my hand  and said, " I think you need a cup of tea. God bless you."  Darkeness  swalllowed her up again before we had a change to say thank you .</p>
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		<title>Midnight creep</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Apr 2005 09:45:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It was always the same, Mum could stand me seeing him, understandable now looking back, if my daughter was creeping of ever night to go riding on the back of a black motorcycle with a smoking smelly misfit I would be worried.  But I like to think that in the back of my mind [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It was always the same, Mum could stand me seeing him, understandable now looking back, if my daughter was creeping of ever night to go riding on the back of a black motorcycle with a smoking smelly misfit I would be worried.  But I like to think that in the back of my mind that I would feel a little bit of nostiger, a little bit happy for her. Those were good day and I think it would be hard to do, lay here next to this fat offe and think of myself as lucky, unless I already knew how bad men could be &#8230;</p>
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